Synthesis feedback

My feedback that I received in todays lesson was very helpful and I agree with their constructive criticism. My peer wrote that I had a clear message, but they thought the text when around it too much. I had a clear introduction but some of my writing was a little repetitive. This I thought was a fair comment as I think it could do with some more work myself. They thought I researched my synthesis very well and included good quotes to it and everything was referenced properly.
What I had done well was the structure of phrases and used a good range of words but my paragraph division needs improving.
Overall I found doing peer grading not as scary as I first thought it was going to be and am happy with the feedback I have received as it will be very helpful when I write in the future.


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